Thursday, 7 May 2020
writing.
i am writing about the evil shoemaker. his actions are really mean and rude. he steals all the little shoemakers buyers. and parks his truck right out his shop so when the little shoemaker does have customers he will go and steal them and the peoples money. but at the end of the story the little shoe maker does do something really mean. the evil shoe maker looks very weird. he has got a ovel face shape and he looks really evil. the evil shoemaker wears a fancy suite and shoes. but he does no make his shoes his machine does it. but the little shoemaker makes his shoes. the evil shoe maker has a golden stick to hold. and he walks really tiny steps. the evil shoe maker seals shoes for a living. it was in France. and he does not have friends because he is rude and mean.
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Hi Harper this sounds like an interesting story. The evil shoemaker doesn't sound like a very nice person. It sounds like he tries to make himself likeable by wearing fancy clothes. Do you know who makes the nicest shoes?
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