On Thursday room 2 and 3 went for a school trip. we went to the gardens,museum, library and the park. First we went to the museum and learnt about maoi culture. then we went to the library and played with Lego and try't to make birds out of Lego and went on the slide there two. then we ate lunch and went to the park and it was full of people. then by the time we got to school it was already home time if i had to rate the trip out of 1 to five i would rate it a teen if that was possible but if not a definitely five
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 6 November 2020
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Hi Harper I really like your post about the trip but maybe next time you could make sure you put capital letters and check your spelling.
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ReplyDeleteHi Harper I love your post on your trip it must have been really fun and maybe next time you could put a photo of you at one of your favorite things witch you did. you could also say what your favorite thing witch you did
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