Tuesday, 5 May 2020

writing.

i could not do my writing on slides so i am doing it on blog i have to tell the difference between the evil shoemaker and the little shoemaker. these are my ideas. they are different because the evil shoemaker steals all the little shoemakers buyers. and the little shoe maker is different because  he makes his shoes and the man makes a machine to do it for him they were  different clothes the little shoe maker wheres a dirty apron and the evil shoe maker wheres a fancy suite.
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  1. Mrs Stewart5 May 2020 at 15:59

    Hi Harper
    I can tell from your writing that you have a good understanding of the story. Perhaps you could write a message to your teacher or one of your classmates and ask how to complete the Venn Diagram.
    Thanks Harper
    Mrs Stewart

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