Friday, 24 April 2020

writing.

today in writing you have to write a story for 15 min i write one about a girl and her bath adventure.

2 comments:

  1. What an imagination Harper! I love to have a bath and I also like swimming but perhaps not with the turtles. Has this happened in your house? Next time can you try to remember capital letters and full stops. Good work :-)

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  2. Oh no Harper! She got grounded for life! It's also great to see you working on paper for your writing activity today. Well done and yes I think that capital letters and full stops would be a great focus :)

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