Thursday, 30 April 2020

my writing

My character that I chose was Greg from the book diary of a wimpy kid. He does tell lots of lies and his best friend is called Rowley. Some people call him a nerd. Greg's personality is sometimes kind and sometimes really angry. If he is speaking to rowley he is speaking nice but  his brother not so much i know that in the story greg would not hurt like punch anyone he is quite nice. Geg wanted to be cool so he went to boxing  class but he could not even beat a girl. this is my writing

2 comments:

  1. Hi Harper,

    Great choice of character from our class novel. Can you repost this so that all of the words fit onto the page? Ka pai- Miss P

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  2. Well done. A great description of Greg. Why do people sometimes call him a nerd? Remember to check your work for punctuation and the WALT.

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