Tuesday, 1 September 2020

persuasive letter.

 


Tuesday 1st August. 


Dear Miss


Pownall, 


I strongly believe that Charlie the dog  should be able to visit Room 2 for a day. There are three main reasons why I feel this way. Reason one being that Charlie could be used as a tool to manage our stress levels. Reason two because he is soooo cute.Finally, he could keep us company if we are feeling lonely at school or if we have no friends to play with. 



First of all Charlie could be used to manage our stress levels.  Studies have shown  that if you pat a dog about three times your stress levels will go down. I have two dogs they are super friendly and if I pet them my stress levels go down too.



Secondly Charlie is soooooo cute who wouldn't want him in the class for a day he has curly brown hair quite small but so friendly. My dog Lulu is so cute that I even want to bring her to school so I think the class would love a dog for a change in the classroom.



Finally he could play with us if we have no friends to play with in the playground or domain. We could let other people join in with the games too and that could actually help kids make some friends well playing with Charlie. 


Yours sincerely, 


Harper Ellis. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Harper I like how you make you blog posts long and in paragraphs, and how you put full stops in you sentence.

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