Thursday, 6 August 2020

persuasive writing.

 W.A.L.T write a persuasive argument

It is terrible that not all kids have pets because...

blind people can go out, you can save one from death, and they are two cute to say no to.


Firstly blind people can walk with the dogs also the dogs can lead them. My old neighbor is blind and had a dog to lead him.


secondly they are to cute to say no to. I was looking for a dog and when i found lulu i knew that was the dog.


Finally My  Aunty was looking for a kitten to adopt. She was going to call him Zeus and she found the kitten of her dreams. Whenever it saw a jacket it would climb into the sleave. As he growed he thought he was so cool so he mad a book about his mussels for my auntys birthday.😂 


In conclusion kids should have pets because... blind people can go out, you can save one from death, and they are way to cute to say no two.
Thank you for listening to my argument. 

 

1 comment:

  1. Some very strong points Harper, well done. I can tell that you have put a lot of effort into this piece. I am proud of you for paragraphing your writing.

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