Friday, 12 June 2020

The Crayons that Quit

W.A.L.T write a persuasive letter so we did ones about the crayons that quite.

Harper,

I'm sick of you going out of the lines. It is really annoying even your little sister is neater than you, come on. Oh and by the way,  pink crayon is mad at you... he said that you think he is a girl's color. Not cool, and not true. 

Anyway, can you please at least colour in the lines next time?

From your neat friend,

 Yellow Crayon. 

2 comments:

  1. Excellent work Harper, I love the humour. I love the part about a 'girls' colour', great work!

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  2. thanks miss pownall i took some time on it

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