Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 8 November 2019
saving sand dunes
2 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Harper I am Lexi from New Brighton Catholic School I like reading about the sand dunes. you need to work on your punctuation like capitals and full stops I also do not like getting sand in my shoes I liked reading about the sand dunes.Good job Harper.
ReplyDeletehi lexi thanks for your comment and the positive and the helpful 😀
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